Academic Language Practice Paragaph 8

Do the Ten Commandments belong in school? Well, yes because when you think of it.Rules do apply to the Ten Commandments. When you make rules in school there's respect, which is one of them. "Thou shall not kill,"is a very important rule to have while you live. Because once you kill someone or somebody, it might cost you life in prison or whatever the consequence is. Another commandment is "thou shall not steal," which can also make you in deep trouble leading to jails, prison, etc. "Honor your father and mother," relates to school because it shows respect towards elders."You shall not commit adultery"  which teaches you to not cheat on your spouse or wife. So the Ten Commandments belong in there, as I read it.