Thursday, July 14, 2011

Business Letter Final Draft

1600 Pennsylvania Avenue NW,
Washington, DC 20500
7/13/11


Mr.Obama
Oval Office
The White House 
1600 Pennsylvania Avenue NW,
Washington, DC 20500

Dear President Obama,

Can we get more money for clothes because 100 dollar's is not enough for group home kids, clothes are exspensive and shirts are like $30+ and shoes are over $100+. It's  hard for us to find pants that fit me at JC Penny's, especially me I'm 6'1 and skinny. Really skinny,  if we get an envolope of money it would be better. Then we have the ability to shop at the mall, nothing fit's at walmart and the jeans at JC Penny are way too baggy.

My name is Andrew  C.Pascual, 15 years old and my goals are to become a professional basketball player or a basketball coach. I would be much grateful if I had a sweet pair of basketball shoes which are $120-$130 and it takes me time to save that much money with our week alounce, I'm writing this letter to you so that we get as much things without wishing or dreaming of it. President, all I ask is "will you be the happiest kid if you were in my shoes?"

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Thank-you for sitting down and reading this letter, this means alot. I am really excited for kids future as they grow up in foster homes, and someday me and you are going to have a little game of HORSE while your at it. Someday you will say Andrew Pascual has changed my life


Sincerely,










Andrew C.Pascual


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