Academic Language Practice Paragaph 5

Should vaccinations be required for all children? Yes, of course because kids may carry harmful diseases which may lead to plaque. Viruses are strong and can spread easily, it will also be uncontrollable. When we take vaccines, it cures or purify's the infected someone. Killing sickness such as flu's, colds, whooping cough, and it varies in viruses. Kids are in need for vaccinations for many different reasons. They need to meet the requirements in order to live longer and healthier. I'm no health expert, but I know basic knowledge to why kids need medicine or vaccination. So ask yourself, what if we did not have vaccinations?