Academic Language Practice Paragaph 6

Should undocumented immigrants be given citizenship? I think not, because it would be dangerous if they did not have an ID. I mean what if the person was an alien? It would be pretty weird if this man/woman flew from mars or some other universe. Maybe it's why we call them illegal aliens, makes sense.  If the Illegal immigrants work and do not commit any crime. They should be employed and pay taxes like everyone else. The United States should have welcome more professional and specialists around the world. Including these illegal immigrants. For them it's really hard to get jobs in thier position, a country without any good pay. I feel sorry for whoever is an immigrant, if I had a choice to choose whether immagrants could have citizenship or could not. I would definitely choose could. But they must meet the expectations given, which are paying taxes, paying rent, paying off fee's. I would allow anybody to live in the United States. People who are not american have no luck of finding anything would have it as of now if I were a president. So it's a yes and no.